First time writing a critique, OK. Well first things first. Proportions. those legs are too far apart. ; u ;..
Second, try not to blur and put so much lighting i mean those white thingies are everywhere in that hair D: (no off.)
figure out where your your light is coming from, and don't put shine on dark areas. ; u ;..
try not to make the hair too "flat" have some hair sticking out, not alot, but some, and don't blur so much and your lines are kind of "bumpy" try to make it smooth c: kbye. hope you get better and better