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Chibi Practicee by Naomi-Kyun

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First time writing a critique, OK. Well first things first. Proportions. those legs are too far apart. ; u ;..
Second, try not to blur and put so much lighting i mean those white thingies are everywhere in that hair D: (no off.)
figure out where your your light is coming from, and don't put shine on dark areas. ; u ;..
try not to make the hair too "flat" have some hair sticking out, not alot, but some, and don't blur so much and your lines are kind of "bumpy" try to make it smooth c: kbye. hope you get better and better :D
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Naomi-Kyun Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
Okay so if you read the description; 1. The actual file which I worked hard on got deleted and I was crying when I did this. 2. I did not draw the whole thing. I used a base and that is why the legs are so far apart.
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CreamyStrawberries Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yea i read the 2nd part after i wrote this LOL .//shot
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